Sunday, December 09, 2007

The Story jus Shrunk...

Everyone around us were shocked, when she kissed me and said "I Love You". It was more of a awkward situation, as her father was staring at me. Before anything else happened i handed over the chocolate to her and as i walked away there were laughs all around....
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6 comments:

Gaya3 said...

I can understand that this is a long time dream u have....and u just ended up the story to make us feel that its a little girl....

- _ ^

anyway....As usual I could easily guess that it would surely be a little girl.... as soon as u said tat everyone was shocked hearing her say those three magic words.....

COOL...... ^ _ ^

11:13 PM
Anonymous said...

Actually couple of days back i had this thought of writing something different, thn was wondering whether i can say a story is a few lines...
Initially was thinkin abt single line story,... which is next to impossible thn..thought y not 2 lines..but cudnt restrict it too...
but nyway 3~4 lines too is gud enough.....even am not statisfied withe outcome...its jus a trail version...
btw thanks 4 ur nice comments

1:07 AM
Anonymous said...

hmm guessed it was a ltl gal... :) neways gud try... better luk nxt tym

8:23 PM
Arun k j said...

thnks anonymous Riaz.... :P
really a surprise to receive a comment from you... :)
yeah the mistake was in my part..
will try to correct the same in future posts...thnx a lot dear

10:38 PM
Anonymous said...

random and kind of creepy

2:05 AM
Anonymous said...

:D
Well am surprised to hear some1 say tht its creepy :D lol
Anyway Thanx a lot 4 ur comments

7:40 PM

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