Sunday, December 07, 2008

The Rebel...

There were still three more to go, those miscreants had taken control of the entire building. All his vacation plans now had turned to his on-field duty. He looked at the dead body of one of them and cursed for all that has happened. The thoughts of the hapless people in the building haunted him as he closed his eyes. He had to do something to help them.

He re-loaded his weapon with the last round. As he moved close to the door, there was a creaking noise followed by movement....He heard them coming towards the door. . As he peaked through the key hole, he noticed all the three got together most likely to plan their next step. It was the right time for him to make a move., but the nervousness got hold of his senses.
His mind calculated the probability of him making out unhurt, even his math skill couldn't help him. But then he realized the opportunity he had.
"What if I miss them? What if they escape? What if the wasted his last round?" questions flashed at every microsecond....

He took a deep breath...held the door knob in one hand and the automatic weapon in the other. Closed his eyes for a second, as if in prayer. The door opened, the three was shocked but by the time they reacted... Bang!! Bang!! Bang!! Bang!! the sound of the automatic weapon..

It was all over!!! He laughed.... "You blood suckers!!!!" He shouted at top of his voice....For the moment he was happy to be a sadist to see the three take their last breath... He breathed a sigh of relief as but then a shadow moved.... Someone was standing behind him...he held his weapon tight, without wasting a moment turned around pointed the weapon and clicked the trigger!!!!

Vijay!!!!!! what are you doing??? He looked at her with a innocent face, "Sorry Mommy...". "Go to your room and clean up your shelf" she shouted. "OK Mommy!" he said as he handed over his automatic weapon - 'The Insect spray' to her. But as he walked turned around, looked at the dead cockroaches and gave a wicked smile satisfied that he has done his duty.

Everyone in the building was saved from those Deadly Miscreants....But our hero walked to his room as if nothing had happened...

3 comments:

Ambily said...

Hay I am the first person to read!!!! And put the comments tooo... :) :).. Again a good creation from u...

Gaya3 said...

hohohohohihihihihihihahahahaha..... ^ _ ^

I would say, I expected such a story from you, but never expected it to turn out to be so sweet and funny ^ _ ^.

I would say... "Sema Timing" yaar....

Good one... Keep up the Spirit Author - _ ^

Anonymous said...

whn u strt writng na
u strt with all serious thngs like creatngs situations....this , tht
keep grip on the format n same serious style till the last but smashd at the last momnt...
stong minded,
keep it up
gud luck

hinu,..the angel